It's your turn to be a teacher again!
Please help me correct the following sentences. Thank you!
1. What a DREAMY picture is it?!
2. Even he expresses so badly,but her teacher didn't give up him.
3. The teacher is greatly.
4. He don't forget teacher and thank for teacher.
5. I think teachers have to do like she did.
6. If I were Mrs. Thompson I probably felt comfy and also felt proud.
7. I hope I had a good work in the future.
8. I don't like in the bage.
9. I very happy.
10. I want to go park with other dogs.
P.S. Please don't feel bad if the above sentences are similar to what you wrote. Let's learn English from each other.
Please help me correct the following sentences. Thank you!
1. What a DREAMY picture is it?!
2. Even he expresses so badly,but her teacher didn't give up him.
3. The teacher is greatly.
4. He don't forget teacher and thank for teacher.
5. I think teachers have to do like she did.
6. If I were Mrs. Thompson I probably felt comfy and also felt proud.
7. I hope I had a good work in the future.
8. I don't like in the bage.
9. I very happy.
10. I want to go park with other dogs.
P.S. Please don't feel bad if the above sentences are similar to what you wrote. Let's learn English from each other.
11 comments:
1. What a DREAMY picture it is?!
2. Even his expresses are so bad, but his teacher didn't give up on him.
3. The teacher is great.
4. He doesn't forget his teacher and thank for her.
5. I think all the teachers have to do is to like her.
6. If I were Mrs. Thompson, I probably felt comfy and also felt proud.
7. I hope that I will have a good work in the future.
8. I don't like in the bage. (I don’t understand the mean of “bage”, so I can’t correct.)
9. I am very happy.
10. I want to go to the park with other dogs.
Ha ha!I'm the first one!!
Thank you that you lend me your PERFUME. I would protect it well!!
You're right about #1, 3, 9, and 10. Good job, Yamie! For #8, it should be "bag." Now you may try again.:)
P.S. As for the novel "Perfume" that I lent you, remember not to read it during any class.:P Enjoy it! :)
2. Even though his expresses were so bad, his teacher didn't give him up.
4. He didn't forget his teacher and thanks her.
5. I think all the teachers have to like her.
6. If I were Mrs. Thompson, I would probably feel comfortable and proud.
7. I hope to have a good job in the future.
8. I don't like in the bag.
Haha! Correcting mistakes is very funny!!
Good night~Irene! See you tomorrow!
You did a good job on # 6 and 7.
Also, you're right about "give him up" in #2 and "didn't forget..." in #4, but something's still wrong in the rest part of the sentences.
Wow, Yamie, you can be one of my teacher assistants.:D
4.He didn't forget his teather and thank to her.
5.I think all the teachers have to do this like her.
2.Even he expresses so badly,his teacher didn't give him up.
4. He didn't forget his teacher and thanks to her.
5. I think all the teachers are like what they did.
2. Even though his expressions were so bad, his teacher didn't give him up.
4. He didn't forget his teacher and thanked her.
5. I think all the teachers have to like she does.
8. I don't like to stay in the bag.
(To Lisa Chen)
Yeah, you can say that: #5. I think all the teachers have to do this like her.
(To Yamie)
For #2, it'd be better to use the verb "express" in this sentence: "Even though he expressed badly, his teacher didn't give him up." And you got them right in #4 and 8. Keep up your good work. :)
1. What a DREAMY picture is it?!
2. Even his expresses is so badly,but her teacher doesn't give him up.
3. The teacher is great.
4. He doesn't forget teacher and thank to teacher.
5. I think teachers had to do like she did.
6. If I were Mrs. Thompson, I would probably feel comfortable and proud.
7. I hope to have a good job in the future.
8. I don't like in the bag.
9. I am very happy.
10. I want to go to the park with other dogs.
1. What a DREAMY picture it is?!
2. Even he expresses so badly,but her teacher doesn't give up him.
3. The teacher is greatly.
4. He doesn't forget his teacher and thank him.
6. If I were Mrs. Thompson I probably felt comfy and proud.
7. I hope I will have a good job in the future.
9. I am very happy.
10. I want to go to the park with other dogs.
3. The teacher is great.
4. He doesn't forget his teacher and thank for her.
8. I don't like in the bag
9. I am very happy.
10. I want to go to the park with other dogs
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