You be the teacher (2)!

It's your turn to be a teacher again!
Please help me correct the following sentences. Thank you!

1. What a DREAMY picture is it?!
2. Even he expresses so badly,but her teacher didn't give up him.
3. The teacher is greatly.
4. He don't forget teacher and thank for teacher.
5. I think teachers have to do like she did.
6. If I were Mrs. Thompson I probably felt comfy and also felt proud.
7. I hope I had a good work in the future.
8. I don't like in the bage.
9. I very happy.
10. I want to go park with other dogs.

P.S. Please don't feel bad if the above sentences are similar to what you wrote. Let's learn English from each other.

You be the teacher (1)!

First of all, thanks for all your keen participation on this blog!:D
Congratulations! You've taken your first step in writing English. I'm happy for you! On the other hand, you might make some mistakes in your writing, which is fine. Don't panic. You'll improve gradually by working together and helping each other. Now, take a look at the following sentences with a few common grammar errors. Please detect the errors and correct them.

1. I'm so boring ,I want to rock music.
2. (It's so cold.) I don`t went to leave there.
3. i hate here. i want to left here.
4. Why do not you be happy?
5. I don't like stay this bag , I want to go outside.
6. where can i going????
7. Does there have any puppy ?
8. I wish Irene can let us don't test anymore!!
9. though u make me very hurt,i love it feeling very much
10. Do you look at me? Come on! You can near me more!

(You may check the answers in my latest comment. 01/07/2007)

P.S. Please don't feel bad if the above sentences are similar to what you wrote because I don't want you to step back, ok?:)