Congratulations! You've taken your first step in writing English. I'm happy for you! On the other hand, you might make some mistakes in your writing, which is fine. Don't panic. You'll improve gradually by working together and helping each other. Now, take a look at the following sentences with a few common grammar errors. Please detect the errors and correct them.
1. I'm so boring ,I want to rock music.
2. (It's so cold.) I don`t went to leave there.
3. i hate here. i want to left here.
4. Why do not you be happy?
5. I don't like stay this bag , I want to go outside.
6. where can i going????
7. Does there have any puppy ?
8. I wish Irene can let us don't test anymore!!
9. though u make me very hurt,i love it feeling very much
10. Do you look at me? Come on! You can near me more!
(You may check the answers in my latest comment. 01/07/2007)
P.S. Please don't feel bad if the above sentences are similar to what you wrote because I don't want you to step back, ok?:)
16 comments:
Sorry......I don't understant what you mean? You mean that we don't need to correct the right sentences??
I mean it's ok to make mistakes in learning English (or anything). Since there are some major errors in your writing, it would be better if they can be corrected in your early stage of learning.:)
2.I don't go to leave there.
3.I hate here. I want to leave here.
6.Where can I go?
1. I'm so bored
2. I don't want to leave there
4. Why don't you be happy
5. i don't like to stay in this bag, I want to go outside
6. Where can i go??
8, I wish Irene can let us not to have test anymore
9. although u hurt me deeply, but i love the feeling very much
10. Are you looking at me?? Come on! you can be closer
1. I'm so bored
2. (It's so cold.) I don`t want to leave here
3. i hate here. i want to leave here.
4. Why don't you be happy
5. i don't like to stay in this bag, I want to go outside
6. Where can i go??
8, I wish Irene can let us not to have test anymore
9. although u hurt me deeply, but i love the feeling very much
10. Are you looking at me?? Come on! you can be closer
1. i'm so bored,i want to listen to the rock music.
2. i don't want to leave here.
3. i want to leave here.
4. i don't understand about this sentence................
5. i don't like to ...........
6. where can i go??/where am i going??
7. are there any puppies?
8. i wish (that) Irene were not test anymore.
9. though you make me hurt very much......
10. are you looking at me ? you can closer.
Wow, you could be teachers, too.:D
Let me list the sentences you did right.
1. I'm so bored ,I want to listen to rock music.
2. (It's so cold.) I don't want to leave here.
3. I hate here. I want to leave here.
5. I don't like to stay in this bag. I want to go outside.
6. where can I go?
7. Is there any puppy?
For #4, #8, #9, #10, please try again.:)
4. why do you not be more happy...............
8. i wish Irene could let us not test anymore...(it ought to be a wrong answer....haha)
9. 【though you make me hurt very much】→is there any mistake??
i love this feel...............
10. you can come to me closely
("can" is Aux. ,so+v ...right??)
pretty guy ~~throw me some cues,please~~haha
4. Why are you not happy?
8. I wish Irene can let us not test anymore!!
9. though u make me very hurt,i love its feeling very much
10. Do you look at me? Come on! You can close to me more!
10. Are you looking at me?? Come on! you can close
Lisa, you're right about this:
"Why are you not happy?" Or you may say "Why aren't you happy?"
Good job!
怡玲, you got it right: "Are you looking at me?" Try to fix the other sentence.:)
8. I wish that Irene doesn't let us test anymore!!
9. though u hurt me so,i love you so much
Yes, for #9, you can say that:
"Though you hurt me so, I love you so much." ^_^
Irene, do you mean to correct the error??or to make a sentence??
1.I'm so bored, I want some rock musics.
2.It's so cold here..I don't want to leave here.
3.I hate here!I want to leave here.
4.Why not you be happy?
5.I don't like the feeling staying inside this bag, I want to go outside.
6.Where can I go?
7. Does here have any puppy??
8.I wish Irene can let us listen to lovely songs in class!!
9.Though you make me feel hurt, I hate this feelings very much!!
10 Are you looking at me??Come on! You can come closer...
Is this okey??
Good job, girls! You've been working hard on this, and it's time to let you know some possible answers to these sentences.
1. I'm so bored, and I want to listen to (some) rock music.
Ex. Studying all day is boring. (令人無趣的)
Ex. He was bored because he studied all day. (感到無趣的)
Ex. Nobody likes him because he's such a boring person. (令人無趣的)
2. I don't want to leave here.
*原句應是打錯字
3. I hate here. I want to leave here.
*大部份情況下: to + 原形V
4. Why are you not happy?
(Why aren't you happy?)
*"Happy"是形容詞, 不是動詞
5. I don't like to stay in this bag;I want to go outside.
*like to V
6. Where can I go?
*助動詞如can, would, should, could, might, will, do等, 其後須加原形動詞
7. Is there any puppy ?
*有: there is/ there are
8. I wish Irene would not give us tests anymore!!
*~wish (that) S 過去式動詞
9. Though you hurt me so much (Though you broke my heart/Though you made me sad),I still love you very much.
*原句語意不順
10. Are you looking at me? Come on! You can get closer (to me)!
*"Near"是形容詞/副詞, 不是動詞.
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